Could I find the One?? No, but Why??
I think I am looking for the wrong one at this cold night,
I went down it, for nothing but to cry.
It was dark and deep, I was looking for the One,
Could I find the Clue?? No, but Why??
The sky was blue and I saw the rising Sun,
It told to me just to make a try.
It was dark and deep, I was looking for the Clue,
Could I find the Truth?? No, but Why??
I saw the Sun, thought I'm not in blue,
It told me nothing but an ecstatic lie.
It was dark and deep, I was looking for the Truth,
Could I find the Light?? No, but Why??
It all came to the end, I woke up from dream,
Oh dear, my search ended in a tie.....
You look better when you try different. Your thoughts are very nice and out of circle. In this poem alternating the things you looking for in 2nd line of first stanza and first line of next stanza is really excellent. My wishes for you to get the thing you are searching in your dreams.......
ReplyDeleteArun.. You r getting better day by day in your creative skills.. The way in which you can put up your thoughts is just amazing.. This poetry is one good example of your exemplary thoughts.. My wishes that you should write more creatively.. "Use this talent gifted to you da"
ReplyDeletethank u vallab.....
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